Maui a e taniwha
One dark night maui and his brothers went fishing for some kai but all of a sudden muai felt a big tug he grabbed the rope with all his might. Then maui yelled “brothers brothers!!! help” the brothers grabbed the rope with all there might but then they saw a tail of a huge red hot firey sharp teeth of a taniwha. Then they jumped of the boat and swam to a deserted island with the net of fish but the taniwha took maui hook. 10 days later with no food the brother built a boat out of wood but maui said just let me fly with my hook that is when maui realised his hook was gone.
Ever since maui lost his hook he never went fishing didn't talk at all he just thought about when he haded last then it came back to him the huge taniwha took it. He run to his brothers “brothers brothers i know where my hook is the taniwha took it at less some good news”. “What do you mean said maui the taniwha has been eating all the fish for as to eat and cook”.
Maui and his brothers had a huddle about what they were going to do about the taniwha 10 days without the brothers going fishing the the taniwha was a little bit confused. Then maui and his brothers went on top of the billing hot volcano maui look down and tried to find the taniwha then he saw him with a blink of an eye then he jumped down on the taniwha.
The taniwha was frightened he didn’t expect anything like it maui punch the taniwha right in his right sharp teeth then he grabbed his hook but the the taniwha punch muai then he couldn't fight. Then all of his brother jumped down and punched the taniwha but the taniwh grabbed one of mauis brothers the threw him up then the mighty taniwha hit him down to his death to drowned. Maui was Furious he swam down grabbed his hook and changed into a mighty eagle swooped down and grabbed the legendary taniwha by the skin of his scacley scales then he past the billing hot volcanic then dropped him into the bubbling volcanic then the taniwha was never heard or seen of again.
Writing : Narrative Legends
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Writing Narrative Legends
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I need help to write a narrative legend.
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I can write a narrative legend if I am guided.
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I can use some structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)
I can use some descriptive words to describe characters, setting and events.
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I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)
I use a range of descriptive words to describe characters, settings and events.
I use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences.
I can organise my ideas into paragraphs.
I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.
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I can use the structures of a narrative (beginning, middle, end, setting, characters, plot)
I use a range of descriptive words and details to describe characters, settings and events. Using figurative language to help develop connection with the audience.
I deliberately use a range of simple, compound and complex sentences to set the mood of my writing.
I can organise my ideas into paragraphs.
I can check that each sentence is complete and makes sense.
I seek feedback on how to improve my writing.
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ryan william
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