cycles

this is my game it is a simple pong game. Instructions use the arrow keys to hit Pluto

writing goals

my writing goals 

to use the right punctuation in the right spots 

to re-read my sentences so they make more sense and use capitals correctly  

firework parody

Walht use similes and metaphors to describe.

S = SImile M = Metaphor   NP = Noun Phrase

Do you ever feel like a (np)flying squirrel ___

Drifiting through the wind, wanting to start again?

Do you ever feel,like a tnt

Like ravine, one blow from falling  in?

Do you ever feel like you _(np)? Are an ant

Screams but no one seems to hear a thing

Do you know that there's still a chance for you

'Cause there's a spark in you?

You just gotta ignite the light and let it shine

Just own the night like __18th of april ___(s)

'Cause, baby, you're __diamond sword__(m)

Come on,let the creepers burst

Make 'em go, "wee wee wee"

As you shoot across the wo-r-ld

Baby, you're ___diamond sword __(m)

Come on, let the creepers burst

Make 'em go, "wee wee wee"

You're gonna leave 'em all in wee wee wee

You don't have to feel like zombie____(np)

You're original, cannot be replaced

If you only knew what the future holds

After a creeper comes an explosion is there

Maybe a reason why all the doors are open

So you could open one that leads you to the wrong road

Like when your  ___mining__(s), and you fall in lava_____(np) you will __die___

And when it's time you'll know

You just gotta ignite the tnt and let it shine1`

Just own the night like _18th of april____(s)

'Cause, baby, you're __diamond sword___(m)

Come on, let the creepers burst

Make 'em go, "wee wee wee "

As you shoot across the wo-r-ld

Baby, you're __diamond sword___(m)

Come on, let the creepers  burst  Make 'em go, "wee wee wee"

You're gonna leave 'em all in cool cool cool

digestive system

my writing goals

to use the right punctuation in the right spots to re-read my sentences so they make more sense and use capitals correctly Digestive system

intro

“How long do you survive without your digestive system?”

The digestive system is how food from our body gets processed  into pooooop and urine.

Parts

This part of the body has parts such as the stomach, liver , Gall bladder  ,large intestine , small intestine , esophagus , appendix, pancreas and the rectum.

How it works?  

The esophagus is really the throat it is the part of the body where the food comes down into the stomach , then gets digested and all the good stuff go to the small intestine and the bad stuff go to the big intestine and they become poooop and wezzz.

How to keep it healthy?

You need to eat healthy foods with  ingredients like  vitamins, minerals, iron, calcium, fiber and carbohydrates. To limit foods that are high in fat. Don't get too stressed to much and stay hydrated on water at all times.

What does the small intestine do?

You might wonder what does small intestine do?, well did you know that the SI (small intestine) is the opposite to the big intestine, well the big intestine digest the SI it sucks up the   vitamins, minerals, iron, calcium, fiber and carbohydrates and breaks down` .